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Only 3 inches today...
#1
in the space of about 1 1/2 hrs. Yesterday it only sprinkled....but today... a cloud burst. Walking thru the yard, mosquitoes just loom like clouds out of the grass.
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#2
> Walking thru the yard,
> mosquitoes just loom
> like clouds out of the grass.

5, 5, 6.

Almost a haiku.

How about...

Walking through the yard,
mosquitoes loom in thin clouds
out over the grass.
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#3
super! will you be my ghostwriter? I'll share the profits (or the fame)
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#4
Only three inches
I was looking to get more
not speaking of rain.
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#5
Sounds like a personal problem.
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#6
Only three inches
Wife forlorn, unsatisfied
Damn you, Weatherman!
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#7
[quote karsen]Sounds like a personal problem.
'tis half-empty or half-full. Depneds on your outlook.
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#8
> 'tis half-empty or half-full. Depneds on your outlook.

Some see half empty.
Polyana sees half full.
I buy new glassware.
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#9
I have no idea where/why this haiku stuff started. Nor the attraction.
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