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"Hello, my name is Todd's keyboard, and I'm addicted to Tom Swifties," Todd's kb said, PUNctually.
However, I waffle back and forth about using a comma (or not) before the final adverb.
“We finally made it to June 1st,” noted Tom, dismayed.
In the above, should there be a comma before dismayed? Or not?
Am a bit embarrassed 1) that this is so important, and 2) that I can't decide.
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I think it works best with the comma before dismayed. but what the hell do I know.
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You're shortening an independent phrase that could be a second sentence.
Where you're joining independent sentences or phrases with a conjunction -- even when the conjunction is implied -- you should use a comma.
You could write it this way:
"We finally made it to June 1st," noted Tom. Tom was dismayed.
Or this way:
"We finally made it to June 1st," noted Tom, and Tom was dismayed.
Or you could write it this way:
“We finally made it to June 1st,” noted Tom, dismayed.
Or you might construct it so that the adjective becomes a dependent part of the sentence and does not require a comma to set it off in this fashion:
“We finally made it to June 1st,” noted a dismayed Tom.
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LOL
Well, of course, everyone likes the comma. Is it grammatically correct?
"Part of me thinks it is, part of me thinks it isn't," Tom said of two minds (while being Frank).
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I'm a descriptive grammarian and suffer no dismay, here.
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Just one comma? how do you plan to enter the Three Comma Club?
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Janit's answer sounds proper, though I wouldn't know correct from incorrect.
I use a lot of commas, to the dismay of some MRFers, apparently.
But they help emphasize words or thoughts in my sentences and establish a certain cadence of my speech.
In reading, some may give too much emphasis to the comma as though there were times ascribed to them.
Maybe I should use one or more depending on their function in a sentence.
If I'm honest, I've only clicked on this thread to read Todd's keyboard's sign-off.
Proper grammar is more by guess and by golly for me.
But that probably goes without saying.
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You can never have too many commas, or too few.