10-27-2014, 02:37 PM
I didn't care for it, not in the least.
It was plain bad.
I like Austen, I like James, but this Fanfic just doesn't work. Partly, the Direction was so bloody obvious. It's like they rehearsed the Stage Directions thoroughly before they got to the reading of the lines, and once the lines were read just once, they realized what an awful mess it was, but decided to go ahead with it anyway, because they're British after all.
Maybe, once Dalgleish shows up in the next episode, things will tighten up.
Or maybe... Zombies...
¬Eustace
It was plain bad.
I like Austen, I like James, but this Fanfic just doesn't work. Partly, the Direction was so bloody obvious. It's like they rehearsed the Stage Directions thoroughly before they got to the reading of the lines, and once the lines were read just once, they realized what an awful mess it was, but decided to go ahead with it anyway, because they're British after all.
Maybe, once Dalgleish shows up in the next episode, things will tighten up.
Or maybe... Zombies...
¬Eustace