08-07-2019, 06:04 PM
I like Blankity Blank's suggestions.
I can't make any sense of why Mavis can't bear to be kept from her grandkids instead of her companion, but that does seem to be the case. You must keep talking to her Gene. Discover her fear, don't assume what it is. It must be stated.
The daughter clearly wants something Mavis owns. Cash, property, affection, something that the daughter is willing to withhold her kids in order to secure it.
I can't make any sense of why Mavis can't bear to be kept from her grandkids instead of her companion, but that does seem to be the case. You must keep talking to her Gene. Discover her fear, don't assume what it is. It must be stated.
The daughter clearly wants something Mavis owns. Cash, property, affection, something that the daughter is willing to withhold her kids in order to secure it.