07-08-2007, 10:36 PM
> Walking thru the yard,
> mosquitoes just loom
> like clouds out of the grass.
5, 5, 6.
Almost a haiku.
How about...
Walking through the yard,
mosquitoes loom in thin clouds
out over the grass.
> mosquitoes just loom
> like clouds out of the grass.
5, 5, 6.
Almost a haiku.
How about...
Walking through the yard,
mosquitoes loom in thin clouds
out over the grass.